I just knew ....
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Did my heart love till now? Forswear it, sight!
For I ne'er saw true beauty till this night.
- William Shakespeare , Romeo and Juliet
I have seen the fair
I have seen the tall
I have seen the beautiful
I have seen them all
But this time was different
I know it wasn't a dream
I know its true, It has to be
you were there, I just saw you
Standing there, It felt so right
dozens must have passed, maybe hundred
but only one was in my sight
were you there ?, Did I really see you?
was it something too good to be true
I glanced and glanced again
just to make sure it wasn't a dream
Yes! it was true, you were there
those deep black eyes piercing through
I have heard the stories
I have read the muse
I have seen them ramble
I know their views
truly divine, yet so human
as if a dream, yet so real
It felt so shallow, just a cliche
I laughed, when I heard them say
"I saw this girl, the girl of my dreams"
But I was there, I saw you
They were right, now i know
there weren't any bells
there were no violins
a long blank stare
And I just knew .....
18 comments
You can become a lyricist. It was very nice :)
wow.. good one..dint know you are good at poetry too!!
Dude, you've left me hanging in the air. What happened after that??
Either ways it was splendid. I've always known you as an excellent writer, but didn't really know you even wrote poems so well. Kudos! Loved it very much. :)
@Nethra
you really think so ? ... thanks
@Evanscent thoughts
Glad u liked it :)
@karthik
It was supposed to be that way, will write some continuation.... but that's a diff story altogether with somewhat sad ending :( ... Thanks for the kind words :)
Dude this is nice...:D
try selling them to some song writer.
and you fell in love
and i jus knew..
lol.. great only love can make some 1 to write such good stuff..
@Sid
thnks ... maybe i'll use them for my duet with taylor swift :P
@Vishnu
something like that :)
love hurts but its worth the trouble :P
Good poem! If it yours then... Hm... I didn't know this part of you!
@darshan
thanks .... yups its all me ...
now u know :P
wow man wow...awesum even i tend 2 write poem sumtimes..beatific dear..wat a poem..write more like this..l;ovely awesum man..plzz carry on
its realy vry touching...i js love it.. good job dude...
@ vineet
thanks for the gracious words...
@monika
glad u liked it :)
Nice poem...Seemed more like a song..Good one..N nice blog...read a few of ur recent posts..!!!
Woww Naveen!! Rocking yaar...
Who's tht?!! ;)
Beautifully written!
@Urvashi
Thanks .... for taking a look around n commenting :)
@Priyanka
Thanks..... stay tuned for part 2 for further details
hey naveen, this is really nice!! Sad ending eh?! I love them
@shruti
thanks ..it was devastating ...
nice lyrics truth of love....
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