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I proposed to a girl she turned me down

Just a dawdling little WHY, while her sister’ frowned!!

Its been six years in the making, going round and round

While the Casanovas run wild, gaining ground !!



We’re lifting weights, we’re curling bars

Dreaming of becoming rock stars

Funky hair styles n acting bizarre

Sipping beer n strumming guitar …



Had our own royal court

Had our very own jester

Even if Zeus threw his bolt

He could still run faster !!



31st july, a day of the year

Marked by celebrations, soaked by beer

Used bottles, pints, shots n cans

Cursed aloud, while the jester ran !!



We weren’t pirates not even Jack sparrow
But had our very own ‘bay’ n knew how to ‘borrow’

Leviathan n Cerberus tried real hard

But we’re simply sipping beer n strumming guitar…



Undertook a few voyages

Discovered a new land

It wasn’t the 'new world'

But we were the first of our clan !!


These are the days that I recall

Those summers, winters, springs and falls

The faces that I long to see

Can someone somehow return to me



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Note from author : a piece dedicated to all of my friends and all the time we spent together, each line symbolizes the things we did together. The golden days i can't return back to. But one can always hope :)

PS- 31st july is my bday :P


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16 comments

namit September 5, 2010 at 3:41 AM

nice post...happy friends... :)
sipping the beer n strumminf guitar.. :)


namit
i blog at http://i-am-a-man-namit.blogspot.com/

Dreamer September 5, 2010 at 11:50 AM

Longing for the past!Nice ! Liked the tongue in cheek reference to Jack Sparrow and Pirate bay, btw :). All the best!

Md. Muddassir Shah September 5, 2010 at 4:11 PM

Well written.
I too liked the reference to pirate bay thing.
Good luck with BATOM

Tavish{Sensible Bakwas} September 5, 2010 at 6:19 PM

hey lovely poem there.... first time here and am liking it!!! keep them coming! :)

Bedlam September 5, 2010 at 10:03 PM

How beautiful was this.. :) Loved it.. :)

ATB for the BAT.. :)

Jaspreet September 5, 2010 at 10:47 PM

A simple poem with a nice flow-wish to return to the past is what most of us wish for, but alas! we all know that the time gone by, will never return.Feelings have been conveyed really well.All the best!

Someone Is Special September 6, 2010 at 4:20 PM

First time here.. Loved your poem a lot.. ATB...

--Someone Is Special--

Brijender Singh September 6, 2010 at 9:56 PM

Brilliant-a no-nonsense throwback to the days gone by,simple and true.
Loved it!

Kshitij September 7, 2010 at 4:17 PM

yeah :)

The time spent with friends doing all that we're not supposed to.. and some of it that we are supposed to... IS THE BEST!

Good to hear your deeds. THough must confess couldnt understand a thing or two... but got the overall feel. Thanks dude.

Good luck.

Kevin September 7, 2010 at 5:33 PM

Awesome!
Still part of the bay? ;)
Cheerz...!

Pavil September 8, 2010 at 12:04 AM

Reminded me of "Poorani Jeans aur Guitar". Nice one....
ATB for BAT

The Fool September 8, 2010 at 12:39 PM

Nice nostalgic reminiscent poem of the wild days of youth.

Dil se September 10, 2010 at 12:22 AM

Wow !! Nice poem! Those days were really the best:-)

Sidra Sayeed September 12, 2010 at 6:23 AM

the drinking beer and strumming guitar bit is something so many of us can relate to. A refreshing take.

Anonymous September 15, 2010 at 10:25 AM

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У меня вот обнаружилось...и собственно вопрос: Я сейчас всех своих половых партнеров, коие у меня еще в жизни предстоят - буду заражать??

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