Night sky ...

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Black night sky with clouds all over it
few stars shining like her silver earrings

far away there is still light in the house
down the lane, there she lives
most beautiful girl I have ever seen

I think of her n fall in an euphoria
I feel liberated, travelling in an abyss

cool breeze blowing on my face
i close my eyes n sit down in remembrance
glimpse of her face i see everywhere around
that beautiful smile with a twinkle in her eye
the way she walked down the street
how earth stopped to rejoice that scene

the path she took for home
being lighted by the fool moon
i stare at the road in hope to see
to see her coming back towards me

5 comments

yesbir July 18, 2009 at 10:53 PM

nic dude..i loved and likes each line of ur heart touching poem..u have a amalgam of love ..affection ..trust ..
how u get combination dude..grt stuff man..u r reaally a genious

yesbir July 19, 2009 at 6:50 AM

MY FRNSD ,HERE WE HAVE OUR NEW " CELEBRITY "..WHO JUST INDULGES HIMSELF IN THE THINKING OF NATURE WITH GRT EXPERIENCE IN THE LITERTURE AND PSYCOLOGY.
FRNDS IGNORE MINE GRAMMER AND ENGLISH BUT PLS CONVEY HIS POEM WITH THE HEART..AND TNK ..HOW,S NAVIN MANAGE ALL THESE TNGS..G
JUST WANA CONVEY ONE QUOTE TO HIM :
' MAN WITH MULTIPLE HALLMARKS WITH PLEASING PERSONALITY"

Monika July 19, 2009 at 1:41 PM

dis 1 z gud... really gud...

manu July 27, 2009 at 11:43 PM

bhai..........,,, u r a great poet..........
pakka tune hi likhi hai na.........!!????

just really awesome..........!!!! :p :p

naveen July 31, 2009 at 12:50 AM

thanks guys

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