If I were a baby again
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Year 1991 ;
Rohit to God - Please make me big and strong, life would be so easy then !
Year 2009 ;
Rohit to God - Please make me a baby again, life was so easy then !
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36 comments
Haha very good one ! well said in a liner,
55-F ? :-) . That's pretty much THE distilled thought of most posts on the topic. Ooops, will stop before my comment becomes bigger than your post :-)
@Daisy Blue
thanks ! glad u liked it
@Madhu
Yeah it sort of does that ... thought would keep it short n simple this time
Gunshot...
No big sentences...
you just said it some paragraphs
stuff in 55 words effectively and perfectly...
lovvvvvd it buddy....
I jus mean every word of your post....
Great thinking...highly practical and straight forward ....
It brought out the dualistic and opportunist mind set of humans with unsaid sarcasm and valid relevance.
much logical and quite rational....
Brilliant work....
Kodos :)
cheers,
mahesh
kya comment mara hai Mahesh ji..
bhai unhone jo kaha shat pratishat sahi hai..
@mahesh
thanks for this highly detailed comment .... a lot bigger than my post :D
@RSV
dhanyawad .. aapke comment ke liye
:P
(i HOPE U DINT MIND IT?!!)
@RSV
not all dude ...
That's true. Childhood is considered the golden period of life by almost everyone. So miserable is human life once you enter into "the world". Pity.
@Darshan
Everyone wants to go back to the gud ol' days but they all forget that there were no gud ol' days :P
First 55 fiction, I am reading on this topic..
Liked it
It's Gr8 how you have put ur thoughts with limited words... :)
Cheers!!
You made your point in just 30 words??
Very nice man. Short, simple and crisp. :-)
Sometimes one just doesn't want to have that cake with all that frilly icing and sweeet taste.
Nor does on want that piping hot, teekha-teekha wada.
SOmetimes what one wants is just a little crisp snack that can satiate the taste buds...
That was what your post was like.
hehehe..well said!!! Agree agree agree :) Grass is always greener on the other side!! That was short and sweet!!
I said to god-have to read this post now.He writes good.But they are long :P
God said to me-stupid the post is SMART and needless to mention sweet....
I said to god- err you forgot to mention it is good too
god said to me- u will remain stupid..SMART also means GOOD...HUH!
god said to you- good luck for the contest VATS....:P
Wow.. This is what I call driving the point home
@Singh amit
thought would keep it short this time ...last time people felt my post was a little too long
@karthik
a new category now 30 word fiction :P
@Arjuna
thanks for the "delicious" words :P
@Evanescence thoughts
thanku
@narendra
too long comment :P .... jst kidding thanks for "divine" words ;)
@ Saimanohar
there is no place like home ;)
haha :) well said
god god..god is always ere to listen to us
One of the shortest post but to the point :D.... crispy ...Gr8 ...
Wow! You said it all in just a few words. Amazing :)
So simple.. so true :)
Good points to remember..
Eh! 55F?!?!?!
Awesome :) Relief from the longer posts!
Brilliant observation!
very profound!!!
Pushpee
LOL...grass is always greener on the other side, eh?
@Diwakar
thanks
@chetan
dats why we appointed him :P
@dhiman
tried my best to keep it short
@prasant
I tried
@rohini
thanku
@shruti
i learnt my lesson last time :P
@Aativas & pushpee
thanks :)
@Psych
seems so
Terse and Apt! You spoke a lot in so less words! Unfortunately, that's the truth of our lives!
Smart move.. ppl hav been saying this same thing using too many wrds, i feel now :)
incredibl..even i miss ma child hood days..1 problm gets over only 2 find d other 1 knockin..gosh will it ever end..nywayz pllzz keep writin
wonderful lines...simple yet most meaningful. I was reminded of an SMS I received recently: When we were young then we were eager to be grown-up, but now we know that unfinished homework and broken toys were better than lacking emotions and broken dreams!!!
Your post was indeed thought provoking.
@neeraj
yups ... sadly that is
@Vipul
me to felt so
@123vineet
even i miss those days ..
@amritbir kaur
thanks for the kind words
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